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| PorcelainWord 2005-09-23 ch 1,  | abuseWhile the idea of emotion represented as shattered glass is interetsing, you don't really present a new view of it. The reviewer before me says this is "perfect," I disagree. It shows a talent for lyrics (rock, especially) not for complex poetry. You're getting there though. |
| sunday night sky 2005-09-23 ch 1, | abuseI really love this poem, the wording and format etc all perfect... it would make really good song lyrics |