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| WarriorHeart 2005-09-22 ch 1, | abuseThis shows complete ownership in terms of style. It is very unique with it's rhythm and flow of words. The repetition for certain phrases and words definately adds impact to the poem's message. Great job, I look foreward to reading more. |
| Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys 2005-09-21 ch 1, | abuseThis was like the most powerful personified piece EVER...i really feel the emotion of the writer and it makes me feel what they r feeling...well done^_^ |