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| Maranwe Telrunya 2007-10-28 ch 1,  | abuseI like it. :) ~Maranwe |
| The Ponderer 2006-05-28 ch 1, | abusei like it; we often take the 'tiny things' in life for granted, so it's nice that u show us that every thing in life is important; whether good or bad. I sense a lot of hidden meaning here... (which means i really like it) |
| Needa S 2006-05-01 ch 1, | abuseGreat decriptions, very sweet. Awesome write. |
| braindead1345 2006-04-30 ch 1, | abuseits cute...good job,specaly for a frist try... |
| Cassie Nova 2006-03-27 ch 1, | abuseaw. this poem is soo cute! and soo true, it is always the tiny things ^_^! soz, u may have guessed, I'm not gd @ giving critcisms, maybe I will sumday... but anyways, loving ur stuff, keep it coming! as always, peace Angelique x |
| mez 2006-03-21 ch 1, anon. | abusewow this has a great sentiment to it , like the short dribbling sentence they make you linger for more- its a great poem and the one word sentences are very effective and sharp llove that precisity take care and thanks for review u neednt worry about getting roung to review me silly see you later wolfe |
| Victoria Humblydum 2006-01-05 ch 1, | abusei like this poem alot also but i think i like "i shiver" a bit better. this poem was more of questioning |
| Winter Flurry 2006-01-02 ch 1, | abuseOH! I love it! It's really nice. And I really love the examples in it! It's so awesomeful(if that made sense to you) |
| truth is subjective 2005-12-11 ch 1, | abusetiny poem about tiny things =) reading through, I realised that a baby is also a tiny thing =) |
| Ether Boy 2005-12-01 ch 1, | abuseI like this. Seemed a bit philosophical to me (no bad thing by any means). Seek happiness in little things. Cool. |
| M. G. Dempsey 2005-11-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseLol aw that's so sweet! Great! Splendid, even! (Splendid is such a great word isnt it? lol). But you've done a good job on this, it has a rythme and you stick to it so well done. Merci beaucoup for your fantastic reviews!! |
| Pheobe Meryll 2005-11-09 ch 1, | abuseAw, this is so sweet and true to life. Once in a while I always end up stopping and thinking how much a moment means to me. I like how you wrote it in blank verse too...frees it from restrictions. I love this for the sentiment - that was what made the poem. ...thanks for putting me on your favorites, btw! It came as a nice surprise...0_o |
| Chelseamuffin. 2005-11-07 ch 1, | abuseThat's true... very true... again, I like it! |
| Sophie Ulquiorra Allen 2005-10-30 ch 1, | abuseYou speak eons about my personal life. Tiny things make me so happy, normally I am not an entirely content person (though I try hard not to show it). Great first stab. |
| X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X 2005-10-28 ch 1, | abuseWhat I think of this is sheer bliss. It aroused a type of feeling in me, a kind of security that not everything in life is so pointless and you shouldn't go through it with frowns. Great piece, loved it! |