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| Maranwe Telrunya 2007-10-28 ch 1, | abuseIt's cute! Even though it doesn't make sense. It reminds me of a lovely dollhouse. And it does have a nice ring to it. ~Maranwe |
| Winter Flurry 2006-05-18 ch 1, | abuseYes it is a wolf! ^.^ I like this poem...reminds me of the random poem I wrote yesterday! -Slipping Fears |
| BearClaw 2006-05-02 ch 1, | abusesometimes the greatest biggest messages are said with the fewest words...(i think that sounded better in my head)...lol |
| incandescent.smiles 2006-03-29 ch 1, | abuseaw, it's adorable! *huggles poem*. Short and sweet. I have no idea what it means, either, but I lurve it anyway. This reminds me of something my friend Steph said about little wooden boxes that triggered a six hour conversation. Random, a little bit funny, and CUTE! :D :D Thank you SO SO SO SO SO (x infinity) much for all the reviews! *grovels* so sorry that I hadn't reviewed you back all this time. But now I have! And from now on, I shall, because I am (mwha) putting you on my author alert list! Keep up the randomness, it makes for some of the best material ever. ~Leila* |
| Cassie Nova 2006-03-27 ch 1, | abusehe he. this is cute. and random. random is always best. ^_^ fab! as always, peace Angelique x |
| Victoria Humblydum 2006-01-05 ch 1, | abuseit does have a nice ring like you said. i think it might sound a bit better if it didnt have the ... at the end, but then again i sorta like poems to cut off at the end not drift on like yours did. anyway i like how short it is]good job |
| truth is subjective 2005-12-11 ch 1, | abuselittle indeed ^^ many ways of interpretation, so I cannot comment much, nice idea though =) |
| Neteri Bennu 2005-12-09 ch 1, | abusecool... and yes it does have a little ring to it |
| Ether Boy 2005-12-01 ch 1, | abuseI don't know why but as well as finding this cute and sweet, i find it rather amusing. Probably due to its sheer randomness. Random is good. |
| Michael Dempsey 2005-11-21 ch 1, | abuselol that's so cute. Short and sweet. Brilliant, I love it! Keep them coming! |
| Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys 2005-11-11 ch 1, | abuse*sighs* So true...and i loved this...just so simple yet effective *hands cookie* Thanks 4 da review...Keep up da good work^_^ |
| rrmehta364 2005-10-29 ch 1, | abusei do ask. where do you come up with stuff so simply brilliant. where, because i plan to go to that place and kick you out. (jk, i wont really kick you out) this smile bought a smile to my face. |
| X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X 2005-10-28 ch 1, | abuseCute. ^_^ Love it to bits, thank you so much for my reviews, it totally means a whole lot. Great poem, keep it up! |
| Totally-Fuzz 2005-10-24 ch 1, | abuseLol, sweet and simple, nicely done. |
| Squishy Lucius 2005-10-12 ch 1, | abuse^O^ i love this one! It's so simple but it makes you feel real good and happy for some reason...lol...keep writing! _Me |