 Dark-Fiend 2007-05-18 . chapter 3hey! I know i know, i might be like 2 years too late, but i like what you're doing here. Slowly developing the character and the plot. I'm guessing since its been so long, that you wouldn't be continuing the story, but hell! readers still dont know whats' going on , stop digressing! xD
take care, and write somemore if you can :) |
 kookykiki 2005-09-25 . chapter 3Yay you update so quickly! Okay, I like how you're giving the history of the character, perhaps so we can sympathize with or understand what he has done. Which brings me to you're clever way of hinting at what has happened, but never actually telling. It's good, so write soon. |
 Dark-Fiend 2005-09-22 . chapter 2This is going way too slow,and you are bloody digressing!all the timebut hey, keeping the readers in suspense is the name of the game for great writers, and...you're doing it well?? now hurry up!lol |
 kookykiki 2005-09-21 . chapter 1Please continue this! Its definitely intriguing and you've left me hanging here to find out more. Write soon. |
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