Wow...

Another favorite author to add to my list...

... What can I say? You're a far better writer than me. It was... a tad... odd.. reading the "doo"s at the end (cuz it's not a song with the music) but it sounds like it'd be a good song. ^_^GREAT! ^_~

nice :D i liked the song-type scheme... good imagery, too. it's nice to see you write more! ^_~

~Max W.~