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| Ahemait 2005-09-22 ch 1, | abusewooh! i read this earlier, but what the hell, eh? anyway, this very awesoem. and i think it would be a cool prologue to a story about destiny and fate and stuff. i dun know... see ya 8th hour! |
| Yemaya 2005-09-21 ch 1, | abuseI think I'd have enjoyed this more if you'd continued your train of thought, written a little more. It could have got very philosophical. Looking at your profile you seem to have to a thing about the supernatural, but then I can't really talk. Seems a bit strange to me you saying you lose interest in your stories if no one responds, I lose interest in stories but thats just because my mind's moved on. If you keep moving on too much though you never finish anything. |
| Kissless Goodbye 2005-09-21 ch 1, | abuseI wrote something like this, but the way you put it was obviously different. Do you watch Scrubs? Well anyway an episode was split in half, the first half a butterfly landed on a gorgeous woman and then in the second half the day was rewound, and the butterfly instead landed on a fat guy and the whole day changed. But, as a twist, the events that happened, although different amounted to the same end, which made you think that essentially no matter what happened someone or something was controlling your life, and the ending was predetermined no matter what. Anyway lol, back on topic! I loved this, its short and to the point. I chose a different angle on my piece, and seeing as it is the same topic, I thought you might appreciate a different view, so here is the address to find my piece, its called "This Way or That?"... http://w.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=1945920 copy and paste that into the address box and read if you wish to. I would appreciate a review, but of course you don't have to. Anyway I really liked this and its interesting to hear someone speak so differntly of the very same topic i myself wrote about. Great! x |