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| White is a Sin 2006-04-28 ch 1,   | Hello, i really liked this. I just loved the last line; 'Hey darling, blow out the candles and make a wishi guarantee it will never come to be' That's my fav Keep it up |
| reach4thesky 2006-04-20 ch 1, | I like that-- it sounds really heartfelt. good job! |
| Princess-anna57 2005-09-21 ch 1, | Good work!! Well done and keep writing!! ^_^ ~Anna~ |