Wonderful language and imagery.

Oh this is so beautiful...your imagery brings the whole story, the whole poem to life!! While reading the first stanza I could hear the clicking, the wind, everything! It's amazing, you are so talented!! This is just brilliant! Love, Mia

on my lips the breathof affinitytransatlantic love

wondrous poetry, wondrous words. it truly conveys how love transcends everything. well, almost everything, cultures, language... as well as the far-reaching hands of affinity. absolutely beautiful and touching. it really arrested and struck me. the diction is really apt and powerfully conveyed.

reminds me a lot of moby. very nice.

i adore how creative this is. the wording especially is majestic. amazing.