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| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-10-09 ch 1,  | abuseWonderful language and imagery. |
| Aimee Raven 2005-09-26 ch 1, | abuseOh this is so beautiful...your imagery brings the whole story, the whole poem to life!! While reading the first stanza I could hear the clicking, the wind, everything! It's amazing, you are so talented!! This is just brilliant! Love, Mia |
| philoslove 2005-09-22 ch 1, | abuseon my lips the breathof affinitytransatlantic love wondrous poetry, wondrous words. it truly conveys how love transcends everything. well, almost everything, cultures, language... as well as the far-reaching hands of affinity. absolutely beautiful and touching. it really arrested and struck me. the diction is really apt and powerfully conveyed. |
| twenty-second seduction 2005-09-21 ch 1, | abusereminds me a lot of moby. very nice. |
| lackluster 2005-09-21 ch 1, | abusei adore how creative this is. the wording especially is majestic. amazing. |