I assume that this poem is about the gap between the rich and the poor. Rich or poor, all have to survive.

Ah, one way of looking at it to be sure. I believe it.

o, crazy awesome imagery oging on here, i muchly loved how this started out and the description of the rain, i dont know, it smeeled very real to me even though it was written in the surreal sense..whatever, very vivid, excellent job

You have really nice imagery. Imagery is what strikes me the most in poetry, because I think what poetry DOES is paint pictures and state emotions.

This was a picture. I could almost see, smell, and taste this city. Awesome.

So sad...the last stanza is my favourite...your descriptions are the best...and the poems flow so well, you amaze me! Love, Mia

Very profound; makes me think.

oh, so pretty.