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| addie pray 2005-10-24 ch 1,  | abuseStunning and elegant, mon amour -- I adore the Shakespeare refrences... just assuming they were intentional. I might just be stating the obvious, excuse me due to entire lack of caffiene today. The ending was lovely. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-10-10 ch 1, | abuseBitter and splendid. |
| Aimee Raven 2005-09-26 ch 1, | abuseThis is so enigmatic, so ethereal...your choice of vocabulary is stunning...always so sophisticated, and even when it isn't one doesn't even notice...ah, I'm talking gibberish now...sorry *cringe* but this leaves me speechless! Love,,Mia |
| La Gitane 2005-09-24 ch 1, | abuseYour words - they're again so lovely - each syllable sounds out in the poem. The merit lies in them, I think. 'fire's indiscriminate embrace' is particularly nice. And the poem is, of course, beautifully executed in terms of story as well... |
| twenty-second seduction 2005-09-21 ch 1, | abusesuch beautifully sad imagery; i love, love, love the ending. |
| Sita Fuoco 2005-09-21 ch 1, | abusePassionate, and powerful. wonderful! Keep it up |