Reviews for Black and White - FictionPress.com

Pheobe Meryll 2005-12-09 ch 1,	abuseI really like that. It's a beautiful but truthful description of a covenent too few keep these days. I liked the line "Once off comes the white dressthere will be tears and strife."
Sharakinpaix 2005-11-07 ch 1,	abuseI admire how you are usig your faith to get through tough times in your marriage, Ceara! I'm sorry if you've really gotten into fights with your man, but while you let your humility guide you, don't forget to stand up for what you think is right! There are some devout Christian men out there who might subconsciously/consciously think women's rights are bs. But that's just the extreme. I'm not saying your husband's like that, but as a friend from a lower walk of life: be careful and ready to stand up for yourself. :)
k-b-cook 2005-10-30 ch 1,	abuseBeautiful without being sickeningly sappy. I like that it is very realistic rather than the seemingly typical "everything is going to be perfect" view.Wonderfully done! ...Dag yo, I can't wait!
Aceandcups 2005-09-24 ch 1,	abuseThat was really sweet. Are you going to read this at your wedding? The rhyming scheme seemed off at first, but then it had some really good ones, "They said it takes hard work, and oftenthings aren’t just black and white,marriage makes them softenin the shades of every fight." Congragulations.
Bernita Bean 2005-09-21 ch 1,	abuseWOW. Even though I've never BEEN married, I still understand the depth of this piece.Wonderful imagery. Much Love,~Mina