Kind of gives hope to the reader..brightens the mind as the reading goes, but it doesn't seem as fluant as some other of your poems..

Another great poem. Sounds like something I did to someone I grew very close to. But I know deep in her heart that she's forgiven me. Keep up the great work on your poems. Amor mucho (much love), Melissa

I really like this. It strikes home to me, because I'm always afraid that I'll hurt somebody irrepairably. thanks for writing about it.

And thank you for your review. I would like a title for it as well, but I don't have one. Do you have any suggestions?

Very sweet. A nice message to pass alone.

Wow! This is excellent stuff. I am particularly fond of the use of "soaring", "cerulean" and "fortitude" in the same line. Read out loud it sounds amazing.

After reading a more recent poem, where you talk about how people don't tend to write with the heart, you prove here that writing from the heart can produce great works indeed. I like this a lot. Your going into my favorites now.

hey, wow. i'm glad you and your friend are talking again. yes, i know how this feels all too well (*sigh*) well, some of my favorite lines in this poem would have to be "close your eyes and forget the past/have faith in wishes and believe they will last/the lulliby of emotions sweeping away your sorrow/ illumintaing this path for a brighter tomorrow". this is very good. i feel the emotion in this piece(*smile*) well, keep writing forever and always and thank you so much for the very nice review you gave me, its very much appreciated!

davida

Very sweet! Your rythem was loose and kind of wandered, but I liked it that way. Your word choice and the imagery they bring to mind is beautiful.

I don't know what to say, your poems are incredibly beautiful! You are very gifted with your way with words, never stop writing! Please!

I like this.. its very sweet and well done.. if you need help eliminating the double spacing let me know

Lovely descriptions. THis was a beautiful poem. I loved "Cerulean skies". This was really beautiful.

Wonderful, as usual o, this one has a very touching aspect because it reminds us all, thats sometimes, it is better just to let go and move on... _ME

WOW! You have got a way with words. It was great. Good job!

ian

I've been in your position before, through my own fault, and like you I wrote about it eventually. I loved the sense of honesty and the happy tone it takes on is refreshing.

Nice poem, full of loftiness when hoping for another chance. The dreamy exceptions given for mistakes.

It is great whenever someone forgives me, yet it is I who is afraid to sing the same exact song.

But this poem is much happier and well constructed than I am. LoL Yeah, jokes. :)