|Reviews for colorless blood|
| HollyRose2043 1/6/13 . chapter 1
I like the brevity of it; every word is made more special and meaningful. If this poem were a person, it would be someone that abruptly drags you into a dark alley to scream at you for five seconds, shaking you by the shoulders, say goodbye, and then leave. It's very memorable, and I liked it a lot.
| rooftopboys 10/25/11 . chapter 1
disturbing, definitely. but brilliant.
| crimson cyanide 2/19/07 . chapter 1
Seriously chilling, though i have to admit that i found the line "finger the live lips on your rotting flesh" a bit too grotesque
| braindead1345 4/1/06 . chapter 1
| the naked civil servant 2/4/06 . chapter 1
oh wow :. that was pretty fucking twisted and AMAZING...
| Ren Sorayume 1/6/06 . chapter 1
the words create a spinechilling image, but in a good way. well done, i like it.
| La Gitane 1/2/06 . chapter 1
oh gosh, I can't believe this poem... it is truly brilliant. The words and phrases and sounds, juxtaposed with the idea... all make it so powerfully chilling. Morbid. Scarily Beautiful.
| Dorian D 12/28/05 . chapter 1
This reads like a thrilling murder novel. Brilliant, in short. It reminds me a bit of Perfume for some reason... Have you ever read it?
| les petits bateaux 12/16/05 . chapter 1
Morbid and deliciously chilling. Excellent piece of work, especially the last two lines.
| Gypsy-Love 11/26/05 . chapter 1
"don't scream, darling, don't scream"
| Galadh Niniel 11/12/05 . chapter 1
Wiw, very unusual and expressive, a powerful, haunting poem, both in its ideas and language, you've certainly got talent.
| astral boy 11/7/05 . chapter 1
absolutely amazing. i love it.
| Lellida 11/4/05 . chapter 1
Ew, but at the same time you made it so poetic and delicate. I like it a lot, especially the first line and the last ones.
| white-clouds 10/26/05 . chapter 1
Woah...that was scary and beautiful at the same time. You're a FANTASTIC writer.
| Sarah-Brighteyes 10/23/05 . chapter 1
I was disturbed and almost awed by this piece in a strange way.
I found the imagery grotesque if I took it in one way and sickening in another. I guess I look too deep in poetry.
I found a dead love in one part of my mind and a dead body in another.
Very good piece... artsy format... good flow.
Bravo... I will have to check out some of your other pieces.