I really enjoyed the last stanza, especially "hoping that you/ '...me too.'" It worked really well, and you captured the feeling of... playful seriousness.

Nice job.

Wow. This is good! I can feel that playfulness! Plus i love the way it was typed out! Nice going!

I liek the format a lot.. its unique & really cool.. it works with this poem well... the whole poem is good too... something we can all relate to

Hm, yeah. The air of playfulness is there, though the second verse can get a bit confusing. Enjoyable, this. Good job!

hola~

Nice poem. But the third verse... I can't really say it's confusing. But it's not like the first one where you separate the dialogues and descriptions.

The third one is a mix up... But I stil understand. And nice too.

Glad you enjoyed writing it ^^