not to be rude; but teeny bopper angst is a bit of a turn-off.

I'm not saying its bad (which it isn't) but that the title SCREAMS teenangst and leads one to assuming thus. the poem, itself, has marvelous flow ,really good lines, and powerful word use. its the title that bugs me, but I ramble. anyway, this was good. I liked. keep writing.

~* noelle