well vented... words work better than knives in the end tho... conclusion i've reached anyway :P

"More like an incomprehendable cure of some sort"

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the words were pretty good, your style is pretty interesting...I'm pretty sure I like it, but, it is different then others I've read...good job

I can relate to it a lot and I know it's hard. You wrote it really well and clearly. Loved it.