wow so simple yet room for complexity. nice work.

Vivid imagery usage, Violet! I'm loving every second of it! I am happy that YOUR happy with the reviews I left you. But, they were only too true. So, don't be getting all blushing and modest on me! You do have talent, you have to /at least/ admit that to yourself. Yay! Go Violet! -squeal!- Wow, that probably made me sound like a pig. Oops. Oh well, I hear that in United States it's Thanksgiving weekend. I'm not sure if you live in United States (I haven't read your profile yet) but if you do reside there, HAPPY THANKSGIVING!

-hands you a turkey- D

loserz. ;)

PS/ Personally, I live in Canada, and we celebrated it in October. D

...i like it. thoughtful. well done!

wow... i love how you incorporated colors to make your poem chilling yet imaginative Great job

keep writing!