I can understand this so well...

I think your poems are as personal as some of mine.

That makes them deeper, detailed, and specific.

It also makes you a brave writer.

And you are already talented.

This is a magnificent peice of work, and unfortunetely, very easy for me to relate to. We live through it though, won't we? The pain only gets worse, but then, doesn't that make seeing our loved one all the more sweeter? Well, whatever. Keep writing, and don't be afraid to ask for help or advice.

`Ghosteyes

*Sigh*...oh, so pretty...I can definitely say that I've felt similarly before.