you have such a gift for words. you really do. I love these poems. ^^ even the summeries are really good. lol.

I'm glad I could inspire such a wonderfully written poem. -Feels important- I would never be mad bout this. It was well written adn its nothing but true. You portrayed it perfectly! Great Work, Really! I can't wait for another poem to be written, I really love your writing! And i'M glad that I could share in it =]

Very good sis...it describes that monster all of is feel inside...*grins* me like!

Such intense emotions~~ you did this poem well~ good work! i love how much feeling was put into this~

keep writing!

i did like it it just seemed to go on not that i think ever poem should be small but i found my self reading it but not feeling like i was not taken it in as much a sat the start

but it was good you just need to be careful when repeating lines as it can help the mind slip away