   Faithless Juliet 2005-10-18 . chapter 1Trust is one of the more biger parts of any relationshio; that and talking, you can't be in any kind of relationship with any kind of communication. I like this.
Juliet. |
 LilLaTLuv 2005-10-09 . chapter 1Hey!
Wow. Short and sweet, yet dripping with feeling! GREAT JOB! And thanks for all the reviews! You're really great! KEEP IT UP!
Luv ya,Tashi :) |
 Nobody-n-Particular 2005-10-07 . chapter 1That is life. |
 kenzie0809 2005-09-30 . chapter 1Well said...I agree with this 100%. |
 S0ulSearching 2005-09-27 . chapter 1aww...its so cool...I think it's gonna become a famous quote or something someday...keep it up.--pammy- |
 Gen 2005-09-24 . chapter 1 OMG THATS BEAUTIFUL! |
 underminingfaith 2005-09-23 . chapter 1i liked how the title implied the poem, and although not very poetic, i would say, it's frankness makes up for it. |
| she who is not signed in 2005-09-22 . chapter 1 so very true. nice job! |
 Silence the Storm 2005-09-22 . chapter 1Wonderful work. |
 The Postscript 2005-09-22 . chapter 1Wow...this is what was totally going through my head today...my good friend is having a hard time trusting me...things are so delicate. I love the truth to your words. As for CC...try to add varity to your words, i.e. don't start two lines with the same word and stuff...challenge yourself to meet the Haiku structure using vivid and colorful language. Keep writing. |
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