ok that was extremely sad but beautiful nice job good display of emotions...

I am really not loving this war, in fact I'm not loving anything about our government lately (including Bush) but I want to support our soldiers because it's not their fault we've got a crazy pres. who doesn't know when to quit, so I figure, love the soldiers, hate the war. It's a weird, mixed message, but I don't see why anti-war people automatically say, "The soldiers don't need this or that."

I love this, not just because of the poem, but the prayer-format. I'm Christian and, though I'm not very big on religion, I do go to church every Saturday evening but I don't think I've ever read the Bible once...I'm a bad Christian ((laughs)), I still love God, though, and this poem is perfect because you are obviously very close to God and you've portrayed this very well.

Anyway, I just ranted on about myself in this review, I'm sorry.

Your poem was great!

Much love,

Lady Glass