oh... lovely, a collection of curiosities.

i like. please keep writing...

interesting. Seriously, very dizzy and...and... kind of like my mind works.

I always love the way you structure your poems! This is such an unusual poem, I love the way that it is written.

Keep it up.

i'll have to read that. i haven't. this was beautifully written.'your carmel skin and biting temper make me' wow, just that detail right there, it's so perfect & beautiful. :)

never read it before.nice haiku though

ah, that poem ending reminds me of sour salad dressings. they come right back to you in the end.

wow. I really enjoyed that. Even though you wrote each chapter at a separate time and their not related or anything, they seemed to connect for some reason. Yeah. unbelievable.

Interesting place to find it! It made me stop and think about it!

Keep it up.

oh, so good. really is.

You’re the red FiestaWear in my kitchen.- ahaha. i have white. heehee.

nice, nice.

The bad metaphors in my poetry -- I love that. XD

this was great. loved the last three lines.

aw.. so cute. a fishy love song c: -whacks your head with a fish- lol. sorry. i'm just hyper. esp if it has something to do with fishies. i love every single piece -adds to faves-

This one made me smile, I like the way that you did this.

Keep it up.

Refreshing and cool. :) I'm assuming that this was inspired by your new pet fish, eh?

'and slip your gills into mine?' wow... you.are.amazing.

it kind ofr eminds me of being a little kid and banging on pots.that and those little noodle necklaces that everyone made, some kids chewed on.

fish remind me of suffocation though.i dont know why.