Ah! Sorry it took me so long to review this! You know how things are, what with spirit week an' all that crap. Anyway, I had a moment, so yea! I love kathy's poetry cause it rocks and stuff...I like the repeating line 'specially, the "cut her deep" bit. And "they sat her down and ripped her up/so that she would learn her lesson"...crazy. Usually I'm not fond of swearing in poetry, but you managed to pull it off, so woot!

Blessed be! Love you, kathy!

wow... that was vaguely depressing. But really good form like a best friend, mother or sister sense. I loved it veyr much. It really illustrates the pain that can come from watching someone get innocence stripped away from them. I can definitely relate tot his, but never express it as well as you did here. good job!