This is such a great story. I love the way your mind works. I never would have thought of something like this. Awesome job on it.

That was really good :)
The most important things are settled in the epilogue - i think - and the ending leaves loads of space for happiness. I like that it's not really cheesy and sappy - no 'i love you', no excessively romantic declarations, ect - but still shows so much love.
I however do hope Denim makes sure Jared dyes his hair back to black ;) LOL

Great story ! Hope you'll write more.
Akai ringo

wow
awsome story
i really liked it! ^^
hope to see ye write more stories
note: i love denim's name... like the fabric ^^

it's good so far.

Ah, ok! I completely take back my last words about the story having no direction. It's really great, but I am so mystified by Jared's & Denims relationship ;o! Is denim a father figure, or is he an older man who is the future boyfriend of Jared? Mystery. It's good! Can't wait to see what happens next.

It seems to lack direction =/. Each chapter seems so separate, the characters hardly refer to past events [going to the movies, buying the puppy etc.]. Hum.

Hm, this is lovely! I like the father/son sort of relationship that Denim & Jared have. It's quite sweet.
But I was a bit confused about Jared's past... Why did he like putting on make-up in the first place [or will that be explained later]? Why did he ultimately act all aggressive & tough to Anthony [& the bullies] even though when he remembers his torment, he's terribly scared?
But, this is really nice. So far it's... Sweet at times :). I love Jared's... 'kiddishness'! You explained his past wonderfully well, & most writers would just write a rushed paragraph or two to explain the tortured soul in need of affection. But I really loved how you dedicated a whole chapter to Jared's past! It gives your characters a lot more depth. Ooh, & I liked how Denim was /not/ an unexplained orphan! There are so many people who just have a random orphan running round because parents are too much of a hassle XD.

Great, so far!

Hey. I know you love FB, so I just wanna say I loved this! The love between the two guys wasn't obvious, sometimes stories go into details and you can tell it's blatantly obvious (I'm not complaining, I like that too). Yours was a suprise, I can't decide if it's good or bad. Good that they loved each other, I think there could have been a couple more clues? One point he was like, oh, the next he was kissing him. I was a bit o_o. I loved it anyway though! I guess I'm just one person who likes the obvious.

I'm gunna check out your other stories (if you have any - haven't looked) soon. This is like, the second story I read and liked on here, proper stories, not just one offs, so I guess I should sift through a few more authors xD

Keep up the good work ^_^

wonderful, sweet, touching and deserving of many more reviews.

I was planing on reading one or two chps and continueing tomorrow instead I'm here glued to it. A hopeful sweet ending, well written lots of description ( but the good kind not the boring are you trying to sell me the house type) and just enough dialog.

I'm adding this to my Fav.

I have a knot in my throat and my heart in stomach.

Yesterday I posted in my journal I want to read something tragic, beatiful and angsty doesn't need a happy ending but it needs asatisfaying ending. This chp had it all.

I'm glad I decided to read this.

désolée de n'avoir pas reviewée plus tôt! mais je me noies dans l'amas de travail qui m'attend! sinon je ne savais pas qu'on était aussi proche de la fin! je m'attendais à ce que l'histoire continue! cependant, l'épilogue est très doux et l'atmosphère tendre. j'ai souri aux dernières lignes. en tout cas merci pour cette belle histoire. les deux personnages principaux vont vraiment me manquer. j'espère que tu as en vue d'écrire une autre histoire, s'il te plait? je t'embrasses bien fortoui cette review était entièrement en français car je me sens plus à l'aise avec ma langue maternelle!

Oh wow. I can't believe it's finished! such an incredible story from beginning to end. I really admire how this is not typical in any way. I apologise for not reviewing the previous chapter...it has been a while since I have been on here. Your writing style is wonderful, your two protagonists, believable, your ending, beautiful. Thank you for the excellent, fluent, consistent story. I eagerly await your next piece of work. Well done. Xx

very nice! i enjoyed this!

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DH

Hi! I know it's not much fun to receive a review from me but I thought I'd try it at least once. And since this is the last chapter... It's now or never, folks! Ok so first off, this story rocks! It's wonderful that you actually were able to finish a story... I'm still hating you for Calixte... You know, for me, Aza is still on the doorstep... What a wonderful ending! Anyways... So this is your first finished story... How does it feel? You know, I'm thinking that if you really want to publish, you just got to go for it. Just select a story, one that feels right, or just write another and try it... Why not? We've already established that the big-shot writers like Hemingway are terrible, so why couldn't you make it too? And if it doesn't succeed... well, you know what they say... try, try, try... try again. Well, this is it for me. Just know that if you're planning on posting DYCAN and that I have to beta it... @_@ ... ... yup... thats all i had to say! Hasta la vista biatch!

loved it