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your bitch slave 2005-10-23 . chapter 4
where the ** is Amber? Off masturbating some where? hm? Stay beautiful and write more **!! *laughs* that's right!! Call me!
Your bitch slave 2005-10-05 . chapter 3
I ** loved that chapter Robbikkins! It rendered them akward ** again... yep spank that monkey moo! I love you, I cant wait until we have sex again! -The moo (Yay,msi concert, lets get ** faced)
ChocolateSugar 2005-09-23 . chapter 2
LOL, Mark has a leash? Funny, very funny! I really liked this a lot. Like this chapter didn't have a lot happening in it, but it still made me want to read more! I must go and check what other things you have written!
ChocolateSugar 2005-09-23 . chapter 1
Wow, I really like this! It's the type of writing that makes you want to keep reading no matter what. Even if you have a bunch of homework to do and should be doing that and not this. It's very alluring. I also like how the characters are not 'normal'. They're differnet which always proves interesting. Like how the nine year old is the only one who cooks. I can't wait to read the next chapter! This rocks!
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