This poem? I thought you wanted to write about another poem!

that's... that's sad..

can't really blame anyone when emotions conquer them.

I dunno what to say. Just that the story deepened my understanding of the poem, and I found out that it's a great poem!

o_o Who's the Silent Hill fan again? Whoa.

I second Autumnymph's request. The 'yeahmaybenono' line itself has a Silent Hill-ish vibe, and you know that that's always good in my book. Mini-story, please.

I like it.. the format & short lines work well... very cool

hmm.. I can only understand some of it. Though I'm interested in the story. Upload it! (That's a command)

Then after reading the story, I'm quite sure i can understand the poem better.. And I'll review it again =)