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Reviews For: The Lonely Girl
Drizit 2005-09-30 . chapter 1
Ah. That's better. Anyway this girl sounds familiar. Lol, i gotcha ;p
simpleplan13 2005-09-29 . chapter 1
interesting point of view.. I like it
Autumnymph 2005-09-24 . chapter 1
Hoomigod.

I LOVE this one. This is really good. It's the story that you put there.

She's alone huh.. When so many ppl want t know her. Good one! Cheers for noticing things like this and putting it into words and making other ppl realize that this happens ^^

And for your previous poem, Alone, the loner, I forgot to say that I like the line "Music in his ears", I dunno why.

It adds meaning to being alone.

I really like this poem. I do. Great job!

Fav!
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