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aripie 2008-10-09 ch 17,	abusei really enjoyed your story - i normally dont go for fantasy stuff but i couldnt stop readin!
Ain't.gonna.take.me.alive 2008-08-10 ch 17,	abuseIt was awesome. The story line was original
Rayne 2008-05-19 ch 15, anon.	abuseGod. You sure know how to make a girl cry =( I love this story. x
Teldra 2008-04-13 ch 17,	abuseLoved this :)
blackrose214 2008-03-21 ch 17,	abuseO.O Awesome story. i couldn`t stop reading. I love the characters and the plot was brilliant. You may think I`M overreacting but I`m not. I swear. This story is just that good. ^^
Escagirl 2008-03-16 ch 17,	abuseThis was a really sweet story. I like how things turned out pretty much okay at the end. Everybody got their sort-of happy ending, which was cool, too.
MacKitty 2008-03-13 ch 1,	abuseeek, i love cordy!! he's so cute. and shiva is REALLY cool. i'm happy that it didn't turn out to be some sort of competition b/t Shiva's old love, the prince, and cordy. hehe. i'm really happy he loves cordy best of all. it could have been really messy otherwise. although i won't say i'm against love triangles. they just have to be done really well. i felt really bad for cordy when jamie's friends kept forgetting him. grr. haha. although i suppose cordy probably doesn't care that much about it. anyway, my point is, i really enjoyed reading the story. see ya!
True.Randomness 2008-02-18 ch 17,	abuseI loved this story. I was awesome and really cool how everything ended. I was soo happy it was a happy ending, I needed a break from all the angst I have been reading lately. Your story was also very well writen making it even better. I can't wait to read the rest of your stories.
Lexy-Kun 2008-01-21 ch 1,	abuseI love this story. It goes in my favorites, as well as you, because this is one of the stories I would like to read again and again (in fact, this is my second reading of your story). You're a really good author. I read a lot of stories, I've read so many in fact that sometimes I don't remember if I've already read a particular one or not. I'm not a really good writer, but I think that I'm a "good" reader : I know when a story is worth it and when it's not. I'm peculiar, exigent, I don't like to read stories when the character is supposed to be male but thinks, acts, reacts like a girl. The plot has got to be interesting, well-done, well handled. I've read from the moment I learned to, so I tend to forget stories which makes me feel like I've already read it a thousand times. But then again, even if the plot is not tremendously original, what matters most is the feelings I get away from it. Here is what I'm trying to say : your story as an interesting plot, though not unseen and mistreated by others before, so I was a little hesitant. You convinced me quite quickly, though. I was soon carried away by your story, I love Cordy and Shiva alike. They are not just one-dimensional stereotyped characters, they have a real "voice", a real personality, and their emotions are perfectly conveyed (at least to me). Even Travis, who at first seems to be just the typical manly guy who thinks he's so viril, doesn't think about others' feelings and all as a lot more depth than that. His past, his feelings, his wish and personality are more complicated. It doesn't change the fact that he sometimes acts and is stupid and rude, but there's more to see in him. I knew everything would end well, because I always read the reviews before reading the story (I hate depressing stories, I read to make me feel better not worse) but I still wanted to cry when Cody made his last wish. I don't think I would have done it, because Shiva has got the right to lead his own life, besides he made a promise to him. That would probably be just excuses so that I could selfishly keep him by my side, but my answer to Jamie would have been "Shiva is not a thing, he shouldn't be trapped in a bottle waiting for his new "master" to rub his prison." Well, whatever, that's not relevant. So, you handled Jamie's reaction to her paralyzie really well, it was poignant and believable. It was the same for Shiva's life, how it is at the same time exciting, disconcerting and depressing to live a short period of time with someone, then to "feel asleep" and to "wake up" hundred years later, at the other side of the planet, and everything's changed. And the way you described why he had those jewels that you always see on the traditional representations of genies, it was well thought of. I don't understand why you only have 96 reviews, you deserve so much more... Well, I'll stop here my ramblings, and I'm pretty grateful to you if you had the courage to read all that. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us.
SaraMaxine 2007-06-21 ch 17,	abuseAW! That was so cute! glomps XD ~huggles~
SaraMaxine 2007-06-21 ch 4,	abuseAnd by chappy three you are being inducted into my favorites list. I think I can see here the story is going, but it's a wonderful direction to go. Have a cookie. ~Huggles from the clan of the strait-jacket!~
Midnights Scream 2007-06-13 ch 17,	abuseYou're amazing and I almost cried when I though Cordy and Shiva weren't going to be together, but you gave us a happy ending and for that I'm very grateful. :) it was amazing!
Midnights Scream 2007-06-12 ch 3,	abuseI like it! Shiva's cute and his harem clothes snicker I like it so far.
Cel M. 2007-03-27 ch 17,	abuseI liked this. A lot. =]
RavenclawMoose 2007-01-04 ch 16,	abuseHello, it's Moose. I finally got an account, and I'm just reviewing again to say that I love this story, and I'm putting it in my favorites. =) You get to be my first favorite story! does the 'I have a favorite story' dance ♣Moose♣

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