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| I Murder on Impulse 2005-12-19 ch 1, | abuselast 1!phew!it is rili good and i mean it!i'll alwaz luv ya emz cya! ~ali~ |
| miss-blackhair 2005-11-14 ch 1, | abusei like this poem. it can somehow control my emotions. good job! hope to hear from you soon! =) |
| allyburner 2005-11-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhat a great inspiration I am, eh? He he. Well, I think it's great. It's not as powerful as perhaps it could have been, but better than anything I could have written. :D Not saying much, is it? He he. Anyhows, I think it's beautiful. :D - Ally B. |
| vodlemort lova 2005-10-26 ch 1, anon. | abuselol no need to decapitate me! yes im finally getting around to reviewing all ur storys/poems any way yeah luving this one to... |
| xiaobudian 2005-10-25 ch 1, | abuseso tragic. It's a really well constructed poem. And I loved you But you never knew And I thought it was because You never cared But you did And you loved me But I never knew Until it was Too late I Love it! Miaows happily! |
| Wishing On the Same Star 2005-10-04 ch 1, | abusei think i like misconceptions and twisted fairytale the best. this is very indepthful and meaningful. keep writing =D |
| Sally-andersonn 2005-09-25 ch 1, | abuseA sad poem of loss. i wipe the many fake tears from my crocodile eyes. I don't get hat but i think it sound poetic, so there! |
| Coping Mechanism 2005-09-23 ch 1, | abuseThis was good, I like when you say... "The message must've gotten lost, Because you didn't." That was a really smart idea to add in, and I like how it ran all the way through the piece, nicely done. That's what seperates it from other romance poems floating on Fiction Press. |