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| I Murder on Impulse 2005-12-19 ch 1,  | abusehey again!just remember everybody !im her lil sis so i noe her better then u guyz do! |
| barbie gurl 2005-11-23 ch 1, anon. | abusehey...sorta breathless after my l8 nite yeha it was jus so grate u noe voldie!! always performing well...almost cudnt keep up...well luv the poem and voldiez stamina...off to have a another go!! can barely wait or breathe 4 dat matta. He was just so seductive and addictive this morning. Now for the afternoon session. cyaz emma! |
| Lovie Dougie Wuvie 2005-11-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseHello my sweet darling Emmy, How are u, my rose? You write just as beautifully as you r, and i hope u continue for many years, so i can appreciate you wonderful talent. Very much in love with you, Louvie Dougie Wuvie. P.S. You asked for this !! =P Dont get ** at me...itz ur fault !! > |
| allyburner 2005-11-13 ch 1, anon. | abuse'lost in a dance of denial' is so beautiful. I can just imagine you prancing around a bush fire and flicking your hair. =D He he. I'm serious. That's what I thought of. But it's still so beautiful. :D This poem is very... um... unique. It doesn't have a set structure, and... the repetition is very random. It works to some extent, but don't overdo it. :D - Ally B. |
| xiaobudian 2005-10-25 ch 1, | abuse*sniffs* |
| Sally-andersonn 2005-09-28 ch 1, | abuseGreat poem! Really dark. Keep on writing my mad companion! |
| SliversofSilverPain 2005-09-23 ch 1, | abuseI love the way you repeat the 'world keeps on falling'; its brilliant! nice choices of words, and the whole thing flows beautifully. brilliant concepts again (although 'concept' sounds like I don't actually like it as an 'idea' or that it's 'not real' or somesuch, which I don't; this is well done!)keep writing, and put summaries on; it will help collecting reviews! |