the poem has a very nice flow...like the words just glide so smoothly...and i like the tone too...the ending was really good too..."the spring is frigid miles away"...although i quite think that the poem was a bit pointless or it failed to point out to something perhaps...its like it was just pure description and that was all you were left at the end, but perhaps you did it on purpose...you still did a good job...and thanks for the review by the way...

truly yours...

I miss your writing, update! :)

mezzie

Fried green tomatoes... :D I like this a lot.

very pretty. makes me need hot chocolate. or maybe cafeine dependency. Whichever, is pretty enough to make me need hot chocolate

Very interesting! I like how "odd" it is! :)