Reviews for Making a mistake - FictionPress.com

I Murder on Impulse 2005-12-19 ch 1,	abuseremember dun take these reveiw to heart k,'cos im waistin mi time!
xiaobudian 2005-10-25 ch 1,	abuseso deep. sighs I really heart your poems. ^^
Lyrabird 2005-10-19 ch 1,	abusenear the end it gets really gripping. i kinda skimmed the first part but it got really good and i love the unusual format and subject.~cassie
allyburner 2005-10-11 ch 1,	abuseNot a great fan of human nature, are we? He he. Great poem. Very deep. Kinda cold, like... very... clinical, you know, like you're looking on the world from the outside. I can so see a video clip to this. Like for a horror movie. Great peom. Loved it. :D - Ally B.
Wishing On the Same Star 2005-10-04 ch 1,	abuseapplauseamazing poetry =P no critique, cos u dun need any
Sally-andersonn 2005-09-25 ch 1,	abuseI can see the whole theing about being only human and all and making mistakes and doingwong things.
SliversofSilverPain 2005-09-23 ch 1,	abuseWow. Amazing. brilliantly written. succinct and flowing; well done. great concept; it is what humans do, is it not? i love the words used... leaves scars that only you can see... very cool