That's so GOOD. Now I want to hear someone sing it!! *nudge nudge* Though if you don't mind constructive ctricism, the "student who has just gotten over an ex" part kinda doesn't flow with the rhythm. Maybe if it was a rap but somehow I think it isn't. Perhaps it could be worded differently but the idea's great! Keep writing =D

All these songs are exactly the same. If you wanted to get your point across without droning on you could just say "yea nobody loves me blah blah blah you left me blah blah I'm waiting its a sad day. Catch my drift?

NAY! Cool song!! Well at least you can write great songs, I can't write anymore (poetry/songs) as the poetic side of me crawled into a corner eating a pie which turned out to be poisoned so it died. XOXO

I really like this song. Very well written and expressed. Good work. V x

it's a tad repetitive with the can i do something? bit.other than that, it's pretty good.

--paige

Tell me, do you know the rhythm of these songs? :P I try to figure it out all the time, but i prevail not. cya

hey! This is good!^_^

hey! This is good!^_^

I adore the chorus, I can really relate. Great work, I really like this! QueenVixta

Nice song, but in friend terms: DANAE! DON'T YOU DARE COMMIT SUICIDE!! YOU ARE NOT DEPRESSED, I REPET, YOU ARE NOT DEPRESSED!! What has the WORLD come to!If this is Salva too, I'm going to be really angry! I don't mind you guys writing emo songs, but you BETTER not be writing this from your heart!

i luv all of these songs! Though my favorite is everything. You know what? This is a sidre I haven't seen in you. Or is it that it's just fun writing depressing songs??

It was heartwrenching at the beginning, in the middle, and at the end. every single poem was hauntingly sad. well done. it seems to have been two different characters? well done! it's very good