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| truebluesarahlover 2005-09-29 ch 1,  | abusewhy is ur peoms so long they are so massive they r suppose to be like 5 or 6 words not like 20 |
| Lines To Time 2005-09-26 ch 1, | abuseWah, I wrote out a whole review for this and then I was stupid and accidentally clicked out of it. Anyway, as I'm sure you can guess, I love this. It's so forlorn and beautiful and just, I love your words, so much. You make me want to eat myself for not thinking of some of these lines. Brilliant. As always. :-P |
| youzi 2005-09-24 ch 1, | abusevery fascinating imagery here.."grapefruit acid"?? and "linen skin"...the ending line was especially poignant.. "lonely and starless". do keep writing =D |
| Chandra-Moon 2005-09-23 ch 1, | abuseThis was wonderful! How do you come up with these things--you have such a lovely imagination and you are so brilliant at writing. Obviously, fantastic job. Keep writing. |
| KittenX 2005-09-23 ch 1, | abuseThis is very lush. Well articulated, structured and created. |