Holy mother of... that was so cool. deep meaningful and yet so dainty. i like it how it rhymes...I love it.

Cheers, Dani

WOAH. LOVE it. Omg. I'm speechless. The only thing: No so many exclamtion points, PLEASE. I won't launch into my usual speech about how you can only use two excalmation marks in your whole life (its ne of those writing expressions). It's just... It really took away from the excellence of an incredible poem. Anyway, other than that, I loved it. I just don't even know what to say. It was marvelous! My favorite lines:

"I curl you in safety,

From the cold world below.

Protect you with my arms,

When the winds blow!"

Bravo. Amazing job.

Great job. Very creepy. I guess you're right; everyone's got a demon, and like it or not, it's a part of us. Again, nice going, you really got me thinking.

I am very connected with those sorts of thoughts, so this really spoke to me. It also made me grin and generally made my day. The exclamation points make it quite super, especially in this part: "My, things are getting fun!/Oh, look what you’ve done!" Lovely work.