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Faye Coon 2005-09-23 . chapter 1
Not too great, the word heart is used almost obsessively. Though I suspect you aren't aware of this, seeing as hoe it was your favorite wird to rhyme with. And just a note on poetry, rhyming makes it seem generic and unoriginal.-Faye
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