|Reviews for White Laced Angel|
| blacktearsofinnocence 10/13/05 . chapter 1
wow, great! i loved the flow. i loved the lines "thorns wrapped around my wrist/in a cloudless reverie" and i loved the title. it was so pretty. "white laced angel". this is awesome. great job and KW!
| account not in use 9/27/05 . chapter 1
| Spiral Artist 9/24/05 . chapter 1
There's a longing in this, innocence, and yet, such pain from that longing. Very amazing.
| AlterEthereal 9/23/05 . chapter 1
Forgive me, but I'm going to be extraneous for a minute...
Just yesterday in English class, I learned about "spatial" and "temporal" criticism. It is said that when both of these two aspects of a piece are satisfied, the work can truly be considered great. More or less.
To the point at hand, this poem is just so visually enriching and intellectually appealing that I have to call it "great". It's really amazing how you can take such ordinary-sounding words and put them together to create something so unique and beautiful!