wow, great! i loved the flow. i loved the lines "thorns wrapped around my wrist/in a cloudless reverie" and i loved the title. it was so pretty. "white laced angel". this is awesome. great job and KW!

davida

beautiful imagery

There's a longing in this, innocence, and yet, such pain from that longing. Very amazing.

Forgive me, but I'm going to be extraneous for a minute...

Just yesterday in English class, I learned about "spatial" and "temporal" criticism. It is said that when both of these two aspects of a piece are satisfied, the work can truly be considered great. More or less.

To the point at hand, this poem is just so visually enriching and intellectually appealing that I have to call it "great". It's really amazing how you can take such ordinary-sounding words and put them together to create something so unique and beautiful!