it's beautiful. i really like your style of writing, but i have to stop reading them now else i'll be here forver!

There's lots of poems about cutting all of a sudden. I enjoyed this, though I don't think I really felt the anger in the first place, so it was a little hard to get into, if you know what I mean.

Thanks for your reviews.

i love, evil, sick and morbid it is great. BTW thanks for the writting.

contemplating living while i'm dying while i'm living. erAced

i love this poem, really dark and deep ... good work!

Let me see... it would seem as if there is a copycat in front of you, someone who's acting like you (most likely to get attention, or even more likely, jeolousy woes); or maybe there is this annoying poser nearby and there is a sense that, what s/he claims s/he feels is just a claim, for, for you, its real all the way to the grave. Violent piece, and I'm not even sure I understand it correctly. But good.

-smirks-My dear...

Your bitterness is well felt in this poem. You use profanity, but it's part of the creative process, and not just stuck in there to look cool. You have some talent.

Thanks for the review, by the way. Always appreciated and such.

Leeona Trance

Oh I love this. It makes me angry and sad. My wrists hurt.

Oh, I love it. It's got that awesome mix of irony and rage, it's hard to pull off but damn you did an excellent job. Thankyou so much for commenting on my one song and comparing me to NIN, that' sone of the hugest compliments I've ever gotten in the time that I've been writing. keep up the work, I'll check out more of your stuff.

Oh, this is nice, I like a lot, great job!

Ooh.. creepy. I like it! By the way, thanks for your review on my poem. I appreciate that very much.

Amazing. All I can say.

Vicious and dead set. I love it! You got one heck of a line across.

I like this. A lot.

wicked...and great! The first stanza is a perfect opener.