O.o it's me. Again. I appeared... out of nowhere... amazing.Anywho.Love this... awesome. Just... oh, you know how useless I am at talking about poems and such! But it's good, I really do like it. The imagery, the... the, just the whole feeling the poem gives, its very evocative and - I hate this, sounds SO cliche! - one feels like they're really there. *sighs* there. said it. Dreadful of me, but I can't put it any other way -.-;I might be putting some more stuff up soon. Hopefully! Exams are looming, however, and my time on the computer is rather limited so I don't get to do alot of writing.But anyway. Great work!

i love the metaphors. great syntax.

Powerful detail and imagry, I enjoyed it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.