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| catching-falling-stars 2006-05-17 ch 1,  | abusehahaha! i hate these poems! but i loved yours. wonderful |
| SarahJaneDrkAngl05 2006-02-23 ch 1, | abusethis is pretty good. dont you just love it when you have to write something like this for school? *sighes* i so hated it. i have a few things up on my site that i had to write for my eng lit class. some of it was so not fun but others i made into little fun pieces. ~SarahJane |
| Smeagol Fasir Kenobi 2005-10-06 ch 1, | abuseYou had to write this for school, huh? It sounded like it, a little like trying to stuff more fireflies into a bottle to get more light. You can only stuff so many nature comparisons into one poem before it starts to sound like forced creativity. It was good for what it was supposed to be, but you've written better.Hope your teacher doesn't assign too many more things like this. I can see where that would get annoying.Namarie, mellon nin--Smeagol Fasir Kenobi |
| inhyel 2005-09-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseHaha you posted your I Am poem!! Hehe. Yours is so much better than mine...*sighs* |