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Hello Messiah
mr. goodstuff
2005-09-25 . chapter 1
I like how you spotlight the fact about dropping someones entire existence on what they do, like the chewing thing, well phrased I think. Or maybe I got it wrong, but I like the flow nonetheless.
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