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Casey Drake
2008-07-17
ch 60,
abuseWow. Talk about complicated...

But that's what I love about your stories--coils within coils.

:D CD
Casey Drake
2008-07-08
ch 59,
abuseSomeone's going to try to trick him into taking it off.

Hah, sweet. I like the twists here.

:) CD
fusionbeam
2008-07-08
ch 59,
abusegod chapter but when are ya going to update the other one?
Casey Drake
2008-06-29
ch 57,
abuseOh, Jana's funny... "So long as it's not slow"... and she picks "Speed"...

:D CD
Casey Drake
2008-06-26
ch 56,
abuse...Nai's parents are gonna divorce or separate, aren't they...

:) CD
Scared Loveless
2008-06-26
ch 56,
abuseThere are so many hardships in these young people's lives, it is hard not to want to step in and care for them. You have made these characters that real to me. I feel as if their troubles are somehow my troubles. It is an amazing world you have created, you have so much going on, yet you manage to keep it in check and organized, if using the chaos theory.
Scared Loveless
2008-06-24
ch 55,
abuseIt is all so complex. I hope the next few chapters will explain more, for I am getting slightly more confused every chapter. But for some unforseeable reason I enjoy the confusion.
Casey Drake
2008-06-24
ch 55,
abusewth? I'm seriously confused, not like that's any big shock... XD

I like this though!

:D CD
Casey Drake
2008-06-24
ch 54,
abuseLack of events? We just got a mini info-bomb!

XD CD
Casey Drake
2008-06-13
ch 53,
abuse-thumbs up- gotcha

Ok, I like this because of everyone's attitude, and that ingenious way that Kai 'talks' on the phone. It's touchtone, and 5 and 7 are two different tones. -grinning- nice! Hey, does Kai ever get a fluffy bit on the end of his tail?

:) CD
Casey Drake
2008-06-09
ch 52,
abuseLove love love love love... I can't wait for Kyle's reactions... you like that name, don't you... anyway, correct me if I'm wrong, but didn't Mirielle get her hands fixed? or did Chaos screw 'em up again?

Let me reread... from the top... oh that's funny, I'd forgot that Kai's dad is named Wade... like wade in water? Heh, three claws, so not royal or imperial. Ha, nice foreshadowing to the whole mindreading thing... -singing- it's not easy being green... I totally agree with Kai so far as Oscars speeches are concerned, though some really good movies do tend to get nominated. They just don't tend to win.

Wait... was Folttel the one who started off the awakening of Chaos??

Oh, right, that's how he got outed, he got depantsed. Oh, hey, that odd guy who ate only meat, is he just an incidental mention or is he someone who is fantasy in hiding and therefore going to show up again?

Whoa Wade's a ittybittybit precog!

Wait. -is reading ch32- Didn't Kai say earlier that his dad's and mom's meeting was a blind date?

LOVE Octopussy!!

HA Chaos took her punishment, outcast, and all, and her hands are back! So why would Mirielle need door handles?

Well, this was a long review, that took some time to do, but at least i answered my own question. -laughing- I'm weird...

:D CD
Scared Loveless
2008-06-09
ch 52,
abuseA late update is better than no update, right? I do believe these chapters were good. A little slow moving, but not bad at all. Keep up your great writing.
fusionbeam
2008-06-09
ch 52,
abusenice chapter
DarkerLink
2008-06-01
ch 50,
abuseWow exciting! Pretty confusing, but really looking forward to the next chapter.
Casey Drake
2008-05-31
ch 50,
abuseThat doesn't sound like usual nurse behavior. Is she an impostor or just phobic?

heh.

:) CD
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