I've probably started reading this story a few days after first signing up on this site (so far a few years now), and i finally finished it early tis morning. This story is awesome. That's all i have to say about that.

"Though I have a feeling you'll find the later more difficult than the former. Take longer, too."

You mean latter. The second sentence is also screwed up. etc.

wonderful plot and story, i'm still not sure how i feel about kai being a girl now... i kinda wish she would go back to being a 'he'. XD

Excellent. -grinning- I remember when this story began... -nod- sweet.

Great story!

Over and out,

:) CD

-steepled fingers- interesting...

Oh, cool, new character!

:) CD

Great story. I liked it. But the only thing i disagree with is that im not sure that that's how the girlfriend's mom and brother would react.

Oh rock on. You're really good at the twists.

:) CD

Oh nice... This is going to be intriguing...

:D CD

-rubs hands eagerly- Ooh! More fun!

Let's see, a female humanoid dragon... probably Tarl. -laughing- I love how everything is coming together!

:D CD

This is an absolutly amazing story that i just kind of...stumbled upon. I really think you have a way of connecting with your readers on a level most authors can't even begin to fathom. I just hope you keep it up and i'm going to keep you on my favorites list in case you come up with anything else, i'm sure i'd like them.

Aww... and you're doing a good job of building up the tension. They've cleared this hurdle, but what's going to happen next?

:) CD

Ooh cool

I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.

:D CD

I agree with you. It had quite a bit of build up yet nothing exciting seemed to happen. I don't have the slightest idea how to suggest you fix that though, sorry. It was good nontheless.

Ups, downs, harmony a faker? then control was put back in place and Kai gets his voice back and then what happens next!

I love this.

:D CD

=D neehee almost there!

:D CD