My brain is confused...

Indeed. It IS the gender. I would know, I'm female and I don't make sense to myself...

OH god.

That is... just amazing. It got REALLY confusing at around 50/60 chapters, but the way it's written it all kinda works out in the end.

The only issue I have is that Mirielle's hands REALLY seem to just appear and disappear... It's kinda confusing, because a couple of times you refer to her hooks as "hands" and it just... added to the whole hectic feel of those chapters. This is SUCH a well thought out story though.

And I absolutely love how Kai turned into a girl in the end! It's absolutely perfect! He always seemed like he would be a better girl than a guy anyway.

:)

But then again I'm a girl, so that may just be my prejudice speaking there -laughs-. I really can't wait to read the continuation of Kai's story. It feels like it's just getting started! You really broke it off in a good spot. Usually with series, the way they end the books annoys me, because it's so unresolved! This way you know it's not finished, you know there's more to come, and what's basically going to happen, but you also have a certain amount of resolution going on there.

Good luck with the writing!

Oh my... Really great developments, but this has been a totally confusing couple of chapters. I think that may just be me though. I'm having trouble keeping track of who has lost what limb/function.

o.o no blood test required...just sample of hair or nail would be enough. but all is good! :D I like this story very much

I've probably started reading this story a few days after first signing up on this site (so far a few years now), and i finally finished it early tis morning. This story is awesome. That's all i have to say about that.

"Though I have a feeling you'll find the later more difficult than the former. Take longer, too."

You mean latter. The second sentence is also screwed up. etc.

wonderful plot and story, i'm still not sure how i feel about kai being a girl now... i kinda wish she would go back to being a 'he'. XD

Excellent. -grinning- I remember when this story began... -nod- sweet.

Great story!

Over and out,

:) CD

-steepled fingers- interesting...

Oh, cool, new character!

:) CD

Great story. I liked it. But the only thing i disagree with is that im not sure that that's how the girlfriend's mom and brother would react.

Oh rock on. You're really good at the twists.

:) CD

Oh nice... This is going to be intriguing...

:D CD

-rubs hands eagerly- Ooh! More fun!

Let's see, a female humanoid dragon... probably Tarl. -laughing- I love how everything is coming together!

:D CD

This is an absolutly amazing story that i just kind of...stumbled upon. I really think you have a way of connecting with your readers on a level most authors can't even begin to fathom. I just hope you keep it up and i'm going to keep you on my favorites list in case you come up with anything else, i'm sure i'd like them.