Cool! Dragons are awesome. ^_^ Very good. I like it.~Ginny

Aww, that's lovely. You captured the gentle morning mood so well. Lovely light piece of writing. Made me smile. ^-^

This goes too fast, but it's a good start-you should keep going. If you wouldn't mind, could you read my story The Arena as well? Thanks :) But good job with Jumper, and you really should keep writing more.