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| Rae-07 2005-11-20 ch 13,  | abuseHA! I loved it! It was an awesome, and amazing story! |
| A.M. Angel 2005-11-15 ch 13, | abuseAww! I loved that, what a happy ending! |
| Celtic Cross 2005-10-14 ch 13, anon. | abuseThis story was FANTABULOUS! I think you should write a sequel! |
| Myrrh 2005-10-08 ch 11, anon. | abuseyou haven't updated in FOREVER...please update? i really can't wait to see what happens...keep up the good work and...update!! |
| Celtic Cross 2005-10-04 ch 11, anon. | abuseThank you Jason for knalking some sense into Marc (thouhg I would have rather been the one to do it *pouts*)!! Update SOON ok? OK! |
| Myrrh 2005-10-04 ch 11, anon. | abusego Marc...HURRY! i hope he gets there in time and everything...update really soon! i can't wait to see what happens next...keep up the good work! |
| Celtic Cross 2005-10-03 ch 10, anon. | abuseWould somebody throw me a bat so I can go knalk some sense into this thick headed, inconsiderate english boy! You don't take a girl out and have a fun, scary, romantic time and then breack up with her because she is going home in four days on the same night!! Update SOON ok? OK! |
| Myrrh 2005-10-03 ch 10, anon. | abuseno what's going to happen? update realy soon please!! despite the sad turn of events, very very nice writing, keep up the good work! |
| Celtic Cross 2005-10-02 ch 9, anon. | abuseGreat chappy! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D UPDATE SOON! |
| melody mama 2005-09-30 ch 8, | abuseAw, awesome job so far! They're so cute. Please keep that other guy away from her. Keep the chapters coming. |
| Celtic Cross 2005-09-29 ch 3, anon. | abuseMarc is VERY adorable! Update SOON ok? OK! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D |
| Myrrh 2005-09-29 ch 7, anon. | abusei really enjoy reading your story, it's really great...i love the fast updates, keep it up! when are they gonna kiss?? i hope it's at the dance/ball thing...i just hope that they can be happy, i mean she's gonna have to go back to the US, what's gonna happen! i can't wait to see...keep up the good work! |
| StargazingatDawn 2005-09-24 ch 3, | abuseknock on the door rather than nock. Other than that, good job. I look forward to reading more Marc-Anne interaction. |
| StargazingatDawn 2005-09-24 ch 2, | abuse16 yrs old, after all."long waist length" is redundantblue before Abercrombie shouldn't be capitalized"make a smoky looking effect" is a little awkwardby the time I got to my seat"they were announcing everyone to buckle up because they were about to land" is awkwardhe was wearing khaki (not kaki) pants"This is my favorite room. It's private..." Should be it's not it private. On a more positive note, I like the way this is going. There's a lot of potential in the story, and you could go a couple of different directions. Does Anne have anyone at home? |
| StargazingatDawn 2005-09-24 ch 1, | abusePreferred, not proffered, and fond not found. This chapter is pretty short, but not a bad start. I'll read the next two chapters and give a better opinion then. Make sure you spell check!~Christine |