such a vivid sequence. bare feet, and warm nights. reflections in harbour water.


i am in awe

This is utterly gorgeous, so thick with flavour and metaphor.

This is so gorgeous. Captures that feeling of stillness, loneliness - darkness. It has an incredible tone to it. Wonderfully written.

That was absolutely beautiful...I haven't read a piece like that... in...purely beautiful

Wow, this is...amazing. The magnificent sweep of feelings it portrays..I love the last four lines about how black walnuts can be made into ink - having a heart as a writing utensil is such a brilliant..brilliant picture. This is so surreal - the stream-of-consciousness-like tone just complements the multitude of strange and exquisite and foreign sensations the reader is made to feel.

*applauds*

I could gaze at the phrases in this for a long, long time. Thank you for writing this.