ah, bitter with loss... i love the resigned pain in this-and the irony/foreshadowing that is created by caling the girl a "modern Juliet," implying that she will kill herself because of his death... as awlays, i love your rhyme.

This is pretty good, I like it. But the title had nothing to do with it, and plus the language isn't allowed in a title anyway.

Okay. i don't understand the title for this, but good poem. Emotional.

The poem itself really was good, I liked it. I said it out loud, and it flowed really well. You also used a more difficult rhyme scheme for a fairly short poem. That's difficult to do, but you made it work. Very well done.

But next time, don't try to send a random anti war statement through the title, and make it have nothing to do with what the poem is actually about.

By the way, when was the last time anyone fought for peace?