hahaha... i think you beat yourself up a little to much.

anywho-this is very nice. i ge a very calm, peacueful serene mood-but slightly tinged by the fact that it is only a dream and not a reality. still, the vision is so clear that i am brought entirely and willingly into this gorgeous mirage... may i join you? :P

Awesome. Good word choice on the thoughts of paradise and escape to your own little world.