Q__Q omg...SOMEONE WHO CAN WRITE WITH MEANING! :bows: YOUR MY SAVIOR!its me Kim by the way O_~ I'll help you out all next week. I promise. The plays going to rock-Kim

Nice.

LL

(P.S. GRAMMER. That is all.)

This is a really good story! And cool plot by the way. I hope you're going to write more!

^_^ Wootness. You didn't lie. Definitely hot making out. Hehe. Did I ever mention I'm not a great big vampire fan? I probably should, not that I mind though. I love the way you word things, if only you could improve your grammar. Ugh. x_o You're so lucky I love you, buddy boy.

Well, considering I am on the phone with you while I am writing this right now then I think you already know what I have to say about this. Meyow. Wow, the things I would do for a Klondike bar. o.O I really wish I knew what I was talking about. You will become the next Muffin Man! Muwhahahahaaha!

Hey,It was good. I'm a stickler for grammer, and I know you can't spell, but you did good.

I like your stories, you know that.

L

*covers her head with a blanket* O. Yayness. I like your way with words but the spelling errors are so frequent they're distracting. (No offense.)

I'm excited to know where this is going. Wee!

Interesting...Do you intend to write more or was that all? If you do, I'll definitly read it. I love the style in which you write, its somewhat gothic - (and no, I don't mean that popular sub-culture that requires wearing lots of black and obsessing over death) - It brings forth images of Victorian England, Vampires & Werewolfs, European castles, and of course, forbidden love...Anyway, I liked it. Keep writing.