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Reviews For: I kissed a girl that wasn't you

simpletonsgrace
2005-10-01
ch 1,
Definately better this way. Loved the last line.
simpleplan13
2005-09-30
ch 1,
i like that last line.. very sweet.. the owl thing is cool.. I like this well done
WormsofCharacter
2005-09-29
ch 1,
So vivid. The title and summary caught my attention, But I have to say I was a little disappointed. I like the beginning and the end, but the middle needs help.
A Face Worth Remembering
2005-09-25
ch 1,
not quite what I was expecting from the title - much better. Great job.
simpletonsgrin
2005-09-24
ch 1,
I think this needs some work. There was some promise in it, so keep working on it.

-simpleton
hiding behind amber eyes
2005-09-24
ch 1,
I like the way i could like see the street like and everything. good job
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