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| simpletonsgrace 2005-10-01 ch 1, | Definately better this way. Loved the last line. |
| simpleplan13 2005-09-30 ch 1, | i like that last line.. very sweet.. the owl thing is cool.. I like this well done |
| WormsofCharacter 2005-09-29 ch 1, | So vivid. The title and summary caught my attention, But I have to say I was a little disappointed. I like the beginning and the end, but the middle needs help. |
| A Face Worth Remembering 2005-09-25 ch 1, | not quite what I was expecting from the title - much better. Great job. |
| simpletonsgrin 2005-09-24 ch 1, | I think this needs some work. There was some promise in it, so keep working on it. -simpleton |
| hiding behind amber eyes 2005-09-24 ch 1, | I like the way i could like see the street like and everything. good job |